Hard core granite wall
High like the proverbial tree
In the middle of the evil forest;
Some try to get across
By climbing..
Jumping on it...
Some try shouting at it..
Maybe it would fall down
Like the walls of Jericho
Most claim they are shot down
By fiery eye darts
I don't believe those tales
Some don't bother climbing
They come 'machine' ready
Forcefully banging
Attempting to break the wall..
They get buried under falling bricks
Some think it's smarter to burrow under the wall
Clawing the dirt with their fingers .
I didn't bother asking how they fared.
There is an entrance in the wall,
A walkway..
Actually a Window
From which a scarlet rope hangs
It's not hidden
Will anyone find it?
Another question would be-
Does the wall really exist??
@itamiie 3/7/15 11:30pm.
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Have a lovely week ahead.
Peace and Love
Tee.
I thought that was lovely. Greetings friend!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr B..
DeleteErm I'm not really good with poetry but all the same, it reads beautifully.
ReplyDeleteAm also not that good with poems. I just wrote stuff, I don't even call what I write poems..
DeleteThanks for reading Lohla.
Glass half full vs. Glass half empty...
ReplyDeleteA thought-provoking post, indeed "Does the wall really exist? " :-)
Well written Tamie.
Thank you, nedoux!
DeleteWow, nice!!
ReplyDeleteIQ babe...thanks.
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